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To SCHOOL, 

23 November 2024

Dear HEADMASTER,

Application for Admission - FIRST LAST

Thank you for the wonderful talk for potential Year YEAR parents on . We are very impressed with SCHOOL and the arrangement of the day. SCHOOL has been highly recommended by our friends, many of which are alumni of your school. SCHOOL seems to be the best of both worlds, a school that is well balanced and yet managed to achieve academic excellence.

Your talk was extremely informative and useful and we do apologise for asking so many questions on that day. We greatly appreciated that you took the time to stay behind for more questions from us. We cannot agree more with the founding principles of your school, PRINCIPLES. We believe that SCHOOL will provide an excellent environment and a solid foundation for FIRST to be equipped with the tools needed in an ever-changing world. 

We now have a much better understanding of SCHOOL and are keener than ever for FIRST to be admitted to your school. As such, we are respectfully requesting the opportunity for an interview for FIRST to be admitted into your prestigious school.

FIRST currently studying at CURRENT. FIRST has been excelling in [subject] and is in the top class. [He / She] represented the school in [competition / exchange program]. During the summer months, [he / she] went to the [outdoor] summer camp to immerse in natural surroundings of [place]. 

On the music side, FIRST plays [instrument], [he / she] has achieve Grade [x] level and is currently playing for the [school] orchestra. FIRST is very sporty and  [he / she] competes in the school [sport] team for the past [x] years. They also love to play [other sports]. In addition, we are devoted [religion] and have been attending [religious service / Sunday school] since age [x] at [religious institution].

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